Ideal

We dream in Ideals

Platonic Constants, never real

Vague and faceless always

Evoking Emotion

.

Dinner cooked and wine drank

The teapot is on

Subdued sight in holiday light

Gentle sounds, vinyl jazz night

.

They, he and she, exhaling smoke

And laughter

Big wooly hugs and smiles

Saying more than any words could

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Across backyards, fences and electric lines

A woman in a window sees

This couple sharing, sharing, sharing

And is confused

Seeing for real

The Ideal

2 Comments

  1. ttyyyyllleerr said,

    May 12, 2008 at 2:17 pm

    It’s sorta sad.

    If i’m reading it right, she has always wanted the Ideal and this is the first time she’s seen it. Which the ideal is real love.

    Am I right?
    lol

  2. adkdecap said,

    May 12, 2008 at 3:00 pm

    Yep, you got it. I always get hit with a little bit of confusion, more impressed amazement these days I guess, when I actually see true love.

    Not puppy love, not young love, but real yeah-they-got-it-no-doubt! kinda love.

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